Journey of Five hours
A journey of Five hours
It was 05:00 in the wristwatch which was kept at the table. I had removed it before sleeping, as I was on my bed my eyes rolled their shutter down. I was on the train now, my eyes were wide open and I found that I was unable to move and suddenly a sumo-like man came through the crowd and stopped in front of me and started shouting 10 ka ek plate chana masaledar (one plate spiced gram of 10Rs). Until I could have realized that he was a vendor one man asked him to give him one plate. As he cut the lemon into 2 parts and squeezed half into the small plate of the grams with lots of spices and some of the drops came into my eyes before I could close them. I felt a sudden force that woke me up from the bed. Now I came to know that it was quarter past 5. As soon I realized that I have to go out of the station to meet my fiancee my phone was shouting at me with the reminder.My phone's reminder was also silent now. It was beeping from last 15 minutes. It was 5:20 A.M. in the morning and I was feeling proud of myself that I have already packed my bag before going to sleep. Now I went to the washroom for throwing my poop. I took shower while brushing my teeth just to save time. I was ready to move on. I was very happy like a child who is excited about gifts on his birthday.
Now the minute hand was pointing to 9. In the next 30 minutes, I have to catch my local from a nearby station. You got it right train was at 6:15a.m. I took an auto to the railway station and in the next 5 minutes, I was on the station. I was counting minutes in my watch. The minute hand was moving very slowly today. I have seen it more than 15 times in a minute. I was getting bored while standing at the platform then I saw some monkeys jumping over each other. Small monkeys were fighting for the chips one was having. Then they all ran away and a huge crowd was coming at the platform as there was an 80% sale at the platform. Then I saw a train coming with passengers sitting above the roof of the train. Some men were dangling from the handle of the coach. Before the train could stop few started catching the handles of the gates. I was getting frenzy as the train was passing me.
As the train stopped, people from the train started jumping off the coaches, and people above the roof of coach also coming down the coaches. I too have to board the same train but was confused about whether to go or not to meet her. Then the guard blew up the whistle, the train had to leave the station but most of the passengers were still thinking to board the train. Somehow I screwed up courage and pushed between the crowd so that I can board the train. Finally, I got on the train some people were still outside the train. It was a very busy morning.
After an hour I realized that my legs were jammed. I could not move my legs as I was surrounded with passengers around me. The next station came and I got some relief as few of the passengers have deboarded the train. As the train started slowly I saw a vendor coming near me pushing the innocent passengers through them. As he stopped in front of me I realized that I had seen him somewhere. Ya, I have seen him in my dream. This time I was cautious about the lemon scene before it could happen. I was standing on the train and thinking about her. Suddenly a huge man put his leg on mine and then I screamed as much louder I can. Then I was like a noticeable thing, everyone was looking at me. Now I stood up quietly till my destination came. I slowly was being carried by the crowd to the platform. It took me about 5 minutes to become normal as my legs were jammed I was feeling lighter below the waist. I sat on a chair for five-six minutes to get relieved. Then I listened some voice screaming "Murari" my name. I saw her she was simply dressed but was looking gorgeous.
I forgot my pain after seeing her. Then we went to a restaurant for having something delicious after a painful journey. At last, we went her home to meet her family. Now when I looked at the time I saw it was 10a.m. in the morning. I returned to my home and slept quietly as I was already tired very much.
It was a tougher day for me. Good night.

Great observations. Really. Just need more clear interpretation of clauses. But i know it would be improved soon. By the way great job bhai.
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